Review Detail of WhiteDeath16 in An Unordinary Extra

Item: An Unordinary Extra
Rating: 5

Review detail

WhiteDeath16Author6mthWhiteDeath16

Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars. I would love any feedback you guys can give as this is my first real original novel. Also, feel free to ask any questions about the story here!

An Unordinary Extra

WhiteDeath16

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ItzNeedlessLv4ItzNeedless

academy arc?

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Kotik_KotikLv5Kotik_Kotik

can you make another attempt at a synopsis because currently you're just telling us that you did all the common cliches of the genre without showing how you're different and unique

6mth

WhiteDeath16AuthorWhiteDeath16

Sure, I'll try to make it better. Thanks for your feedback!

Kotik_Kotik:can you make another attempt at a synopsis because currently you're just telling us that you did all the common cliches of the genre without showing how you're different and unique

6mth

_07_JaiprakashpLv12_07_Jaiprakashp

it's cliche but has its own uniqueness also to fully decide to support you should release more chapters and don't drop it because its nice.

5mth

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?

5mth

WhiteDeath16AuthorWhiteDeath16

Only one in the end.

Ashborn1609:I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?

4mth

Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

WhiteDeath16:Only one in the end.

4mth

Hardy1jLv13Hardy1j

Synopsis say Class A's So it should have the equivalent to schl in such novels, that is academy. Not sure tho

ItzNeedless:academy arc?

10d

ItzNeedlessLv4ItzNeedless

Yeah, its academy. I read it already.

Hardy1j:Synopsis say Class A's So it should have the equivalent to schl in such novels, that is academy. Not sure tho

10d

Hardy1jLv13Hardy1j

Oh Alr Tq

ItzNeedless:Yeah, its academy. I read it already.

10d

Ijekiel_PendragonLv4Ijekiel_Pendragon

You have wonderful narrative skills. Thank you for writing🫰👌😗❤️