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Awriter
AwriterLv41yr
2023-05-18 18:47

Please don't drop; This is very interesting.

Harry Potter and the transmigrated twat

THE_alpinism
4.1
43 Chs

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THE_alpinism
THE_alpinismAuthor

thank you man. it feels good to be appreciated.

1yr
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MrCoconut
MrCoconutLv14

While the story was interesting, the grammar is awful. It reads like somebody trying to text but has a character limit for their cell phone plan. Not only that, but the premise kinda killed it for me. Neville being the Boy-Who-Lived isn't terrible, but the Author decided to make the trio focus (Neville, Hermione, and Harry) similar to team 7 in Naruto. Neville has crazy amounts of power, Hermione is the talented one, and Harry just has control. Author really made his version of Harry turn into Sakura, which explains all the monologues and sass. It was all Harry's CHA moments.

1yr

Nine11P2
Nine11P2Lv4

okay I will list all the key things in this fanfic:- 1) writing quality :- it isn't the best of the best,if you expect very edited perfect grammar writing then this isn't ,it almost feels like you are messaging someone but not bad enough to be considered bad webnovel is full of obnoxious writing so this is average i guess 2) character:- now this is where I was surprised,mc is a cautious one, he has a good humour(finally),he also has flaws which I am thankful for cuz nobody likes perfect mc aka Mary Sue. he feels like a normal adult just put down in Harry Potter . 3)story:- the plot is good if you read ahead you will feel like the fic has many plot holes but later the author fills it by giving information. whole idea is not new but it's around mc and almost feels like an AU which the author said it's not. 4):-updating stability:- it's just the starting author proves it by giving us chapters 4-5 per week minimum idk how long it will go.... fyi this a a neutral review feel free to point out the wrong facts

1yr
THE_alpinism
THE_alpinismAuthor

is 300k views and 1k collection in one month good or average???

1yr
Joe_momma
Joe_mommaLv4

The mcs personality is great. It is funny.

1yr
Jacob_Hobbs_7913
Jacob_Hobbs_7913Lv4

A lot of people are turned off by the obnoxious writing in the first couple chapters but honestly it was not that bad to me. it is a little obnoxious in the beginning but gets better a few chapters in. I like the character interactions so far (as of chapter 25), as it isn’t cringe. I honestly have a hard time conveying other good points without sounding biased, so I’ll just leave it there.

1yr
LGK_maore
LGK_maoreLv4

really nice ,,i liked the mc personality and the mentality he goes by 🔥🔥🔥🔥

1yr
Emu_Lator
Emu_LatorLv1

The writting and story progress made me hate everything about it. A lot of the cast is acting out of character from canon and the personality changes as well as what mc does... reading about it only produces anciety, annoyance and frustration. I dont feel good reading this at all

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Godsreader_15
Godsreader_15Lv1

One of the better Harry Potter fics I've read. The MC is entertaining, the flow of the story is good. My problem is the external part of the writing, please download some grammar correcting application or just get a beta reader because sole of these paragraphs are barely legible.

1yr
Ashish_Kumar_1835
Ashish_Kumar_1835Lv4

The grammar is abysmal. The story has no purpose. Infrequent updates are also a big factor.

1yr
JustAlitleShadow
JustAlitleShadowLv4

This some gud sh Mc is super likable and quite funny The grammar is good Over all the book is a must read

1yr
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