Review Detail of Jaffaaaa in Clash of Titans Online

First of all the author can be proud to launch such a big project. It’s a very nice world and the characters are interesting. We all know that game genre and love it. The chapter length is good. For my taste a bit too much. I just had one big problem and that’s the formulation. It could be just not my taste. As marked in the comments I did not like some of the structures of the sentences. It sounded plastic and a bit of unrealistically. But I would recommend you to just edit it if more people agree. Basically I loved the name giving and the environment. The atmosphere is written well. Just a second problem I saw would be the mixture of different perspectives. As a reader I would say it is too much. And as author I would praise your unique st yle. Keep up your good work, with a bit of overlook you can make it more solid.