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Zbara_1577
Zbara_1577Lv41yr
2023-05-24 22:39

Good writing quality terrible story development and character design. The characters feel fake, and while an attempt was made for character growth, it was brushed over. Let alone the fact that this is based in the real world, yet you got your character pumping out multiple comic book issues a day, busy with cafes, and sort of getting what you want from surrounding adults despite ridiculous requests, As AN 8 YEAR OLD. It's a good story is you are braindead. I never get this obsession in fanfics where people must make the mc do everything while a child/preteen. They write like mc dies at 18.

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A rather interesting direction you're headed into... Kudos, I guess...

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I am in absolute love of this fanfic. PLEASE keep making as much as possible. This is so much fun to read and its a good fresh take on this genre.

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I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IS GOING ON.............................................................................................................

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5 Stars. Perfect. Grammar, Story Progression and everything else is just perfect. I have been recorded waiting for this type of novel for years. The only thing I would like to critique on is that his meeting with Kevin Feige was too convenient and because of this it felt a bit out of place. Besides that I don't see any problems.

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Is this now a trend to give 1 star to good ones?

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5 ⭐ Great story so far, I hope you continue with the good quality of chapters.

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