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Junkies
JunkiesLv131yr
2024-02-04 00:19

this book writing style is excellent, but its separate story chapter and information chapter for some reader its unique,as for me its make my brain to read it carefully less then miss the plot i call those information chapter cliffhanger chapter, personally prefer blend those chapter. if author keep changing pov its sure thing story development can be rich, i just hope author makes the story unpredictable, deception to the reader not just in the story. well i take a guess since i just read till chapter 25, that will be more character show up since author keep changing pov am afraid author brain will blow up, this novel isn't suitable to be webnovel if he want to make masterpiece as for world background well i need a map lol

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SlothfulChronicler
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World Map is in the auxiliary chapter, thanks.

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