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the mc is a wuss and annoying. the mc takes any enjoyment you might get from the story away. he or she, I have no idea really, it says he and people treat it like he, but he she is used a lot, and it says female lead, but who knows. if it's a female, the author is terrible at writing females. the mc constantly whines the whole time, it groups with a complete stranger that dies and it cries like the person was a relative, being it has already been through dungeons for 3 yrs in thevold life death should not affect it so much. the mc trained for 3 years for the dungeons but is still weak, so I have no idea there. honestly, if the mc is female, I will head out. The only reason I stuck around was because I thought the mc was male and just a puss, and I guessed the he/she stuff was just a translation issue. I am at around 30, and really, if the mc hasn't improved by knowing it has pre knowledge, I don't see any hope for the story. I wouldn't even rate it for bored toilet reading. Seeing the mc whine or be scared all the time makes it a drudge to force yourself to read it. I stuck around, hoping the mc would improve, but all that has increased was the whining and whimpering, and it's not even smart enough to ask the right questions when Oz speaks to him. totally acts like it's never endured a life and death experience before.

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This Time I Will Survive: Why is Everything Different?

DarkElven6

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Thank you for the review and honest commentary. While I know this isn't everyone's cup of tea, I wanted to showcase the very real emotions of PTSD and valid trauma response of the character Kai. In the beginning I was afraid no one would give it a fair try knowing the MC was a female. So that is why there are very few descriptors. Thank you for giving TTIWS a try. I appreciate any and all feedback.