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Nar_cisse
Nar_cisseAuthor1yr
2023-10-15 05:04

Author here. I deserve these 5 stars if only for the sheer amount of work I put in this fanfic. What you will NOT find here : - Harem - R 18 What there WILL have : - Gore (I fancy myself a very graphic writer, but you will be the judge of that) - Well built characters (I am a character driven writer : plot is made by the characters, it doesn’t happen to them) - Regular upload schedule (Believe me everyone, we will see this story to the end - except if I die and my sister can’t log in to post everything posthumously) - Good orthograph/grammar - I’m French and I write in French then I translate everything to English (not MTL) but I consider myself fairly good, if not fluent. If not for the occasional mistakes or typo, you won’t find much - and if you do please be lenient with me because I know how annoying this can be and I alaways try to provide quality content Hope you will have a nice reading experience everyone !

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Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

I take it the Mc is a villain? If so, is he a natural villain or merely forced because of circumstances?

Nar_cisse
Nar_cisseAuthor

I don’t believe in ‘good vs evil’ - way too manichean. How you decide to view the MC once the story end is totally subjective and up to you. But you’ll definitely know why he does what he does.

Master_Celestial:I take it the Mc is a villain? If so, is he a natural villain or merely forced because of circumstances?
solo_leveling_god
solo_leveling_godLv4

ship??

solo_leveling_god
solo_leveling_godLv4

???

solo_leveling_god:ship??
Nar_cisse
Nar_cisseAuthor

None

solo_leveling_god:???
TheComedy_Mask
TheComedy_MaskLv3

merci beaucoup mon ami

Nar_cisse
Nar_cisseAuthor

Note : I allow myself the right to delete fake reviews from fake accounts as well as hateful comments for the sake of hate. I welcome every bit of constructive criticism, be it positive or negative, no matter the rating.

GodOfPride_z
GodOfPride_zLv3

Will he have a love interest in the end? Because now that I see it has the romance tag, and until chapter 181 I haven't noticed any of that. Just curious. (Translated by Google)

Nar_cisse:Note : I allow myself the right to delete fake reviews from fake accounts as well as hateful comments for the sake of hate. I welcome every bit of constructive criticism, be it positive or negative, no matter the rating.
GodOfPride_z
GodOfPride_zLv3

Chapter 133, sorry..

GodOfPride_z:Will he have a love interest in the end? Because now that I see it has the romance tag, and until chapter 181 I haven't noticed any of that. Just curious. (Translated by Google)
Nar_cisse
Nar_cisseAuthor

There is romance but not for MC

GodOfPride_z:Chapter 133, sorry..
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

What is MCs power ?

Nar_cisse:I don’t believe in ‘good vs evil’ - way too manichean. How you decide to view the MC once the story end is totally subjective and up to you. But you’ll definitely know why he does what he does.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

shoto todoroki, hmm i wonder?

Romance_guy:What is MCs power ?
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

i checked the reviews section and that seems pretty accurate, just cause of that and because the story sounds epic, ima give it a try right away. (to be specific)your account and the story as decribed in the reviews section are sufficient for me to skip the process of asking questions.

Nar_cisse:Note : I allow myself the right to delete fake reviews from fake accounts as well as hateful comments for the sake of hate. I welcome every bit of constructive criticism, be it positive or negative, no matter the rating.
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

I thought he got some extra powers Have you started the story ?

Ireallylikereading:shoto todoroki, hmm i wonder?
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

the sysnopsis said nothing about him getting extra powers, also powers obtained in the story doesnt count because that wasnt mentioned in the synopsis, by the way how about you did you read it yet, if you did could you please tell me what you think, im hesitant but am close to deciding to start reading i just need one more confirmation or reason to finally start. thank you in advance man

Romance_guy:I thought he got some extra powers Have you started the story ?
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Just started but it’s looking good so far

Ireallylikereading:the sysnopsis said nothing about him getting extra powers, also powers obtained in the story doesnt count because that wasnt mentioned in the synopsis, by the way how about you did you read it yet, if you did could you please tell me what you think, im hesitant but am close to deciding to start reading i just need one more confirmation or reason to finally start. thank you in advance man
Other Reviews
_Spectator_
_Spectator_Lv12

I'm at chapter 97 at the moment, writing this. All I can say is that this is one of the most unique MHA FFs that I have read in forever. It has amazing world-building, not just for the MC himself but for every other character as well. Dare I say some characters have more personality than their counterparts? You can feel the dedication to details in world-building and how things are tied to a plot point. Now the MC does not have plot armor. Well, he does. You know he won't die, but that doesn't mean he won't suffer. It's amazing to read as his personality grows and changes with time. This world of MHA is more realistic, thus more darker, and it shows you that without holding back, the MC will suffer. He got cheats, but he does not get power up out of nowhere just because he is losing. No, he works for that power up from the moment he realizes he can die, and nobody will notice. The world won't mourn him, and he is not special just because he had a second chance. And he understands this early on with a traumatic event that breaks his psyche and rebulits him as you read the aftermath. If you are looking for something different than the norm of the I got reborn and have cheats, everything will work out itself kind of story, then try this. Don't look at the reviews; just read it and decide for yourself. Though I admit some might not like how the MC suffers psychologically, it's a unique and amazing read for me. It's a different one than the standard, so if you want something different, give it a chance.

ELKO
ELKOLv3

*Honest review without spoilers* First of all: this story is VERY heavy compared to the original, the characters are very emotionally charged and no one here escapes without PTSD. So if you want something light, this story is not for you. Another warning is, this fic diverges considerably from the original, there is almost no highlight of the students of class 1-A, but in comparison, we have a lot of the Todoroki family and the backstory of the world of heroes, of course, since it is not shown in the anime, a lot of things are invented from the author's mind. It is relatively slow in the beginning, (because like, the guy is a child) but it is not boring, don't be intimidated! In the future it gets so chaotic that you beg for a break... That said; This is probably one of the best fanfics I have read throughout my "career", it has great writing, character development and, relatively, a good description of fights, which is hard to do. I can't say much about the power system, since I'm not familiar with Naruto, but it seems to be good enough for someone like me to understand. Another thing that caught my attention is the psychological description of the characters, it's an aspect that usually leaves something to be desired in fighting animes, but here we have an emphasis on the traumas experienced by the characters that influence the future of the plot, and for me, it's something that contributes a lot to the development of a character. But what really caught me here was the difference from the original work, I've read many MHA fanfics and they're all very similar, most of them want to have their OC befriend the original characters, participate in the festival, be a hero, blah blah blah, the issue is that writers are usually afraid of diverging too much from the original work, and this limits them and what their work can become, Narcisse doesn't have this fear and that's what makes this story stand out. (HIGHLIGHT for the absolute professional ethics of always posting regularly). My sincerest compliments to Narcisse, you haven't even finished yet and I'm already wondering what you're going to write next... (・・;)

sir_sir_ris_ris
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