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2024-03-22 07:21

The novel is a pretty good read, the author definitely knows what's he's writing about and seems to have the plot well planned out. Th MC is a fun character, he's well written and while he seems infallible the author has done a great job in balancing him out. The side characters are also really well written, they all add something to the story in their own way and help to ground the MC. Overall the plot is really good and the charactersl interactions are enjoyable to read. Although the update are kinda inconsistent sometimes.

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Thanks for your review. I'll endeavour to update more regularly

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