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RCVLv51yr
2023-12-30 10:11

Great story! The dialogue between characters is used well, and kept improving since the first chapter. I like stories that use dialogue to move the plot along, as well as build the relationship`between the characters. In shorter terms, showing instead of telling. Lastly, I find the plot/story interesting.

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thanks man

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