Review Detail of kirkblackwell21 in Gacha No Life

Item: Gacha No Life
Rating: 3

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kirkblackwell21Lv114mthkirkblackwell21

It started off as a good story, but I feel like you kind of just skewed off from the original story before he went into the high class dungeon became completely crazy for a bit after that, I just feel like the story kind of was all over the place. I feel like if you rewrite it and stick to the story that you were doing before everything got out of hand it be a better story.

Gacha No Life

PuckZCat

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PuckZCatAuthorPuckZCat

Yeah, I tend to fall off topic depending on how I feel during the writing process. I'm not that disciplined to keep my thoughts in order and out of the way of my writing, so they tend to get all jumbled up! So for that, I apologize

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kirkblackwell21Lv11kirkblackwell21

Your fine I just feel like if you went back and gave the story a rewrite it could attract a lot of pension and likes you know it’s just a story seems like it would do well with more of a slow burn feel

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