kirkblackwell21

Basically him but I think the Chinese version of it?

Main bad guy of season one of Jackie Chan adventures a older animated cartoon.

It’s a interesting take on the game and I kind of like it normally when I see stories like these, everybody normally gets completely chromed up but he’s deciding to stay full flesh but a crafting tech strategy going for him is interesting I like how you fleshed out the domino effect it had on the glitter bomb to take out Kirk though nice background filling for the world

Keep it up I will keep reading of you keep updating it’s hard to find any stories that actually deviate from what everybody else is doing, but it’s a refreshing take on it.

Really liking this story keep going and I will keep reading only think I can tell you to change is that his name is handsome jack need to give some respect to such a hate able tragic villain

Really liking this story please keep it up you got me hooked I started reading on a whim and really got sucked in was sad when I got to the “to be continued” message already wanting more