kirkblackwell21

It’s a interesting take on the game and I kind of like it normally when I see stories like these, everybody normally gets completely chromed up but he’s deciding to stay full flesh but a crafting tech strategy going for him is interesting I like how you fleshed out the domino effect it had on the glitter bomb to take out Kirk though nice background filling for the world

Keep it up I will keep reading of you keep updating it’s hard to find any stories that actually deviate from what everybody else is doing, but it’s a refreshing take on it.

Really liking this story keep going and I will keep reading only think I can tell you to change is that his name is handsome jack need to give some respect to such a hate able tragic villain

Really liking this story please keep it up you got me hooked I started reading on a whim and really got sucked in was sad when I got to the “to be continued” message already wanting more

Your fine I just feel like if you went back and gave the story a rewrite it could attract a lot of pension and likes you know it’s just a story seems like it would do well with more of a slow burn feel

It started off as a good story, but I feel like you kind of just skewed off from the original story before he went into the high class dungeon became completely crazy for a bit after that, I just feel like the story kind of was all over the place. I feel like if you rewrite it and stick to the story that you were doing before everything got out of hand it be a better story.

Can’t wait to read more seems like this it going to be a good book just got caught up and I’m excited for the tri wizard tournament can’t wait to see how this turns out

I have a feeling he will have 2 headed coinflip luck soon...

The thought of that little robot coming around the corner aiming its guns singing baby shark makes me want to die laughing

Here i was hoping for a happy dog with a cannon on its back