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2023-09-03 08:46

My personal opinion The idea is certainly beautiful, but the chaos of the world is not possible to realize itself. Too absurd hero aura, how does it even work? Some heroes are stupid, because the author wrote so and remain stupid, there are no complaints about them But those that are, as it were, smart, I, personally, irritate. It looks too stupid, unbearable Trying to make the characters what they are in the novel is terrible. And finally the time The story drags on too long. For 50 chapters in the novel, it will not take even two days. This is not what I expected to spend my time on. Just disappointed.

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