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2023-08-24 09:33

The start was perfect, I have nothing to complain about. But after chapter 35 the quality declines so much that it's scary, from which point on the author stops taking the protagonist seriously. He begins to magnify the "children of fate" so much that it is ridiculous. Not to mention that I could write a bible just quoting the times some character said "hehe how interesting" or "I hope you make things fun for me hikaru" and that's absurdly annoying. I can't forget to mention that the author doesn't take seriously the rules he wrote himself, preferring to ignore them completely to aggrandize the "children of fate" again (and no, it's not a genius foreshadowing of plot armor, he's dumb himself.) Can I start talking about the system? He or she, is completely useless and hikaru is even more so. Hikaru: This skill you gave me is not working. System: yes, but it's not working because... Why not! Hikaru: Just, thank you for always being with me system, you help me so much 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Basically, this novel starts off well but sinks faster than the titanicBasically, this novel starts off well but sinks faster than the titanic.

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