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Hokonoso
HokonosoLv135mth
2024-06-29 11:42

0 butterflies which makes this story extremely boring. Just change Loki a bit, give him OP system, then watch him do nothing but get married, have kids, and have his kids do things which don't change the timeline at all. Every storyline from MCU happens, nothing is butterflied away even though it should be. Makes story extremely episodic and boring to read. Though from a Loki standpoint, the only butterfly he cares about is Thanos and thus the only things that might change are related to him, but since you have to read hundreds of chapters of things you already know the original ending to, it is a boring read.

MARVEL: Loki, the Frozen Fruit Ability

typicalanimewatchr
4.1
209 Chs

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typicalanimewatchr
typicalanimewatchrAuthor

Good Chinese MTL Novel that's why I uploaded it here. Fast Paced with intriguing plot. Loki x Sif with two daughters who now staying on Earth.

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typicalanimewatchr
typicalanimewatchrAuthor

THIS IS MACHINE TRANSLATION [MTL] AS MENTIONED IN SYNOPSIS. NOT EDITED. NOT A TRANSLATOR. MC IS LOKI - FAST PACED - ACTION - WHOLESOME. PLEASE LEAVE A REIVEW AFTER READING THIS NOVEL IF YOU ENOJYED IT.

1yr
James_So_1432
James_So_1432Lv4

Why is it that MTL Chinese superhero fanfic have interesting premises but the writing quality is terrible with names being butchered a lot…

1yr
RiJU
RiJULv1

[Loki, King of Johtunheim] Completing Missions - Fast Paced. Good relationship with Kamar Taj and Ancient One is kind of a disciple. Magic R&D always going on but not in the later chapters. All in all, RECOMMENDED ❄

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Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Fanum
FanumLv4

Bruh chinese writers don’t have imagination i’ve seen hundreds of fanfics and they all have the same system, same cliche and the characters name changes in every paragraph,MC power hungry never satisfied and he wants every anime power in existenc.

11mth
_narrator
_narratorLv4

Ever heard of giving Hulk a steel sword this what I thought after reading this title. Whatever you say I don't think any fruit can surpass casket of ancient winters.

7mth
timepiece94
timepiece94Lv14

From what I can understand it's a good story I've only been like the first 10 chapters but the grammar was so bad and it was really hard to understand sometimes and he jumped from paragraph and made no sense overall it was terrible but the story did have promise all of you have to do is fix all the grammatical errors.

6mth
Naksh_Raj_4698
Naksh_Raj_4698Lv14

Nice one.Can anybody provide the link for original please.

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