I only give this five stars because it's a translation and the one posting it shouldn't be penalized for the story itself. There are so many inconsistencies in the marvel world and has to be seen as a heavily AU fanfic to be enjoyed. Many of the things and developments are not consistent with comic or mcu allowing the MC to do things that don't make sense in the normal marvel universes. The story is also to heavily driven by the MC which doesn't allow for a lot of growth and development in other aspects of the story like side characters and lore. On a more personal issue with the story I am not a big fan of directly giving powers from one fiction to another in most cases as there are exceptions. For example giving conceptual powers like power over frost in this case is fine the connection is legit and makes some sense but specific abilities as seen in the first one it rubs me the wrong way because it lacks imagination in a universe were powers can be limitlessly creative. All that said it is an interesting idea and has a lot of potential but spends it mostly on makeing you cringe.
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