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2023-12-13 13:03

Story is interesting but its loosely based on vampire diaries with some sort of weird real world (where its only TVD shows nd books) and vampire diaries world (her reality), you might like the Easter eggs but this story has very little basis to the original story. I was fine with an open marriage but multiple damens is weird and creepy, the dynamic is overly complicated just to be original. I was hoping for it to be based during the plot as well but it doesn't, it starts in the future. Over dramatized nonsense to shine a light on the darkness of the world, its so over stated you kinda just get numb to it. things are repeated constantly. she talks about getting raped good and hard to show her strength trauma. I bet there are people who would like confusing *ss relationships and dark topics but im pretty sure you'll just be force fed emotional situations until you're numb and bored then give up after realizing thats all this story has to offer and move on. cherry on top there's so fake original brother named Elias. lol 馃槅 馃ぃ 馃槀 馃樄

Salvatore Saga, Part One:My life with Damon.

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Thank you so much for your review. I am rewriting this story from the start. The plot stays pretty much the same, but I am expanding, explaining, and adding stuff up, so I am taking all of this very carefully and trying to improve my story and get there some more depth and put those Damon麓s in good use when I sometimes get there, but I am just starting my rewriting, and this will take time, but this was soo good to get real honest feedback. THANK YOU!!![img=recommend]

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