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ZyRule
ZyRuleLv11yr
2023-05-11 18:26

There are grammar errors, I suggest you proofread first. but, overall it's good!ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

Mary's Little Lamb

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Vimbai_Murindagomo
Vimbai_MurindagomoLv1

The story has potential going forward . I would however advise the author to proof read his work before publishing as he tends to make minor grammatical as well as spelling mistakes which could douse down the pace of the story. Otherwise it has potential given that the tittle takes many readers to their nursery days with rhyms, which I feel is the true genius in the creation of the story.

1yr

mrdarksoul
mrdarksoulLv1

The synopsis and grammar need a brush-up. It doesn't do justice to your story. Your story has so much potential. The scenes need a bit of coherence and flow. Other than that, it's definitely worth a read. Keep up the good work Author!!!

1yr
LingShuang
LingShuangLv2

The story is good and heart warming, though needs some improvement... I like it very much! keep updating Daily more❤️

1yr
Dashing_Knight
Dashing_KnightAuthor

very nice book with deep meaning inspirational

1yr
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