Review Detail of NotNecro in Echoes of Madness: Fragments of Us

This story is written beautifully, with what I could tell good writing quality and a portrayal of realistic characters. The only thing I would say to improve is to change the paragraph size of the chapters and make it a bit shorter as it makes it a bit daunting to read. Otherwise, the chapter length is fine. Other than that, it is a very good story, so keep writing.