The Ice Guy and His Cool Female Colleague

Alright, first off, there is no way in hell that English is not your first language. I mean, the writing quality is just incredible. Anyway, I don't usually read classical works and historical books, but this story has a very interesting storyline, that makes the whole world feel a bit... enigmatic? I really like the choice of words in this book, and even if English is my first language, I'm starting to believe that you are better at it than me! TLDR: This book has a great storyline, so just go ahead and read it.

I can understand why YOU wouldn’t want to go back to see the parents, but keep in mind that in his previous life, he was an orphan for 10 years, so he just wants to give them a chance and see if they really are as bad as he remembers them to be. As I have explained, he can only remember his memories, not feel them. As for getting bullied in the Academy, byy the time he finishes the competition, he would have been able to finish his training with the Lotus Guildmaster. Also, you can assume that he will have boosted his stats by eating another herb just before the competition starts, so he won’t always be the weakest person of the bunch.

This story is written beautifully, with what I could tell good writing quality and a portrayal of realistic characters. The only thing I would say to improve is to change the paragraph size of the chapters and make it a bit shorter as it makes it a bit daunting to read. Otherwise, the chapter length is fine. Other than that, it is a very good story, so keep writing.

I don't normally read stories like this, but I wasn't afraid of giving it a try. This story has very good writing quality and immerses you in the scenes that the writer wants to express. Personally, I think that the start of this book just sprung out from nowhere, and no hate to the author, but the pacing of the story was going at lightspeed. This doesn't make the book any less bad, but you should slow the story down by adding more details of the character's thoughts, adding some slight comedic sentences and maybe including POVs of other characters and their thought process over the scene. Idk, just an idea. Overall, I think you are an underrated writer, and you should keep up the work :)

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Ha, for real, you thought… (hafryt)

First off, I do recommend this book. I really like the way this story has progressed with its World building, and writing vocabulary. It has a really cool concept, and I immediately thought of something like Pokemon. One small issue, that would really help your book, is to use Grammarly or any browser extension that goes over and fixes the little grammar mistakes that you make, and creates a fluid reading experience for the reader. Other than that, I would love to see how this story progresses.

A million? That is a very, VERY small number for a population in the entire world. I think maybe a billion, would be a bit more accurate.

This is a nice story, but a little work on grammar and writing quality would make this amazing. I recommend using the Grammarly browser extension.

Just another shameless author review. It has only been a few chapters or so since I started this story, and I wanted to let you all know, that this story was lightly inspired by TAPOV, but don't worry, as I obviously will take my story down another path. Here is just a FAQ, since I don't really know how to review my book. Also, feel free to reply to this review with Questions. 1. Does this novel have a harem? No, I hate writing harems, and I will never start one. However, there will obviously be a romantic interest. 2. Does this novel have a sentient system? Yes, but, hold on, don't just drop it. The system is there to help the MC. While maybe in the future chapters, I don't want to spoil anything, but the system's attitude is there for banter. 3. Will the main character be OP af? In the beginning, no. But don't worry, his mission is world domination. 4. Will the main character be dense af? No, he is definitely shrewd enough to use his wits to win. While at the beginning he has a carefree attitude, character development will definitely kick in. Don't worry. 5. How will he be a king, if he doesn't want to kill? If you have read a bit of the story, I have mentioned that he is not in favour of killing. But leave this to character development. Trust me. In conclusion, don't be afraid to start this book and point out any mistakes in paragraph comments, or the chapter comments if you have anything you would like me to improve. Thanks for reading this lmao.

Just give the story 50 chapters or so...

Hehehe... Don't worry, I have something in plan for that...

what do you mean? Is it because you think he has entered this world too readily or something?

Thanks for the review, I agree and I don't really like harem novels, so I hope that I can write a book that you will enjoy :)

Respecting differences?? This is a book, not a philosophy lesson lmao. This is probably a bot, but thanks for the 5 stars?

Thanks for the comment. There is no harem, since I haven't put a harem tag. And the system is there to help him, and for friendly banter between the two ig.

I dont like to write harem stories, so no, it is not a harem.