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Floxy_Belle
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2023-06-24 20:40

It is definitely well written, and has a good plot. The characters are also good and can be understood well. All I'm trying to say is that I like it! I've only read a few chapters though, but I'm definitely going to read more. Good job 👍

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Diegoa
DiegoaLv15

This novel really caught me by surprise, and for me it has a lot of potential to be in the top 20 in the golden rankings if this novel gets contracted. I don’t even know how it doesn’t even have more views or more reviews because this novel has a lot of potential. The writing currently is great, and it improved over the 100 episodes. So, I am expecting to be great, and that’s why I put in 5 stars. The update stability is improving, that’s why I put in 4 stars, and if is consistent to the current pace that the author is going in updating his story, than in the future it may be in 5 stars. Story development I put it at 4 star, and in the beginning it started maybe a little boring and the characters were not that Interesting, but you manage to change my mind, and your characters are improving rapidly. So, in the future it may be 5 stars, but for now is 4 stars. Your character design are the most impressive thing about this novel for me. You manage to give me a clear description of what they look like and I am loving it. Your world background needs to improve, and now because Alex is going to find the hearts, I am seeing that your are going to introduce more background. But, one criticism that I have is that I don’t know what is the current structure of the empire. I don’t even know what are the names of the 12 families, and we are already in the 100 chapters. In my opinion, I think you should do a auxiliary chapter that includes all the information that we need because it’s easy to forget, and also explain the power system in that chapter because it took me some time to fully comprehend the power system, and even now I am not really sure that if what I understood is correct. Anyway, I hope that you can continue this novel because it has potential to be great and one of the best novels in webnovel. Keep up the good work!👍👍👍👍

THE_LOST_GOAT
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zakaria_f
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Notrus
NotrusLv2

Well, I finally caught up with the novel, I really don't have much to say, it's just wonderful and it hooked me from the first chapter, when I got to a certain chapter, I thought I was going to leave it because something happened that I didn't like, but I decided to continue reading because I had faith in it, and that's how I am, I don't regret continuing reading, I thought the novel was going to get worse, but it has completely exceeded all my expectations, it has improved with each chapter, and I liked the development of alex and nadia, there are still many mysteries to discover in this wonderful novel, and I want to think that this is just the beginning, I want to think that there is still a long way to go to finish the novel, I know it can be hard work for our beloved author, but cheer up You can author hahaha, the novel deserves much more recognition, the background of the characters is incredible, and that the complete backgrounds have not been shown, the story is also wonderful, incredible mc. Also the secondary characters, both good and bad, are amazing. This novel is definitely an amazing hidden gem on this platform. It became one of my favorite novels with only 174 chapters so far. I hope the author doesn't drop it. Don't ruin this wonderful novel, keep it up author with this amazing work, some may think that I am going too far with this opinion that I am giving, but I am not. Beware, I'm being completely honest, try this amazing hidden gem on this platform with mostly trashy novels. Good job author🎩 (author, increase the chapter rate please🙏🤑)

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