Review Detail of NameIsLife in Eye of Shadow

This was a very odd read, and the main twist makes it even weirder. I see the author being quite passionate about the story, and they are trying their best, yet this story is very far from both my taste and, even, from my comfort zone. Grammar could use a touch, or a few, but it wasn't bad enough to be a deal-breaker at any point. Sadly, can't say the same about the main twist.