The book is fascinating. It's definitely a hidden gem, you know when you start a book you're totally immersed and can't stop reading? It's like this book. If someone told me that this was the author's first book I wouldn't believe it, I would easily buy this book if I found it in a bookstore. The only point the author needs to be aware of is the speed of the story, books with very slow development are not successful on this platform, I understand that you would like to make a detailed plot, but be careful not to overdo it. That aside, the book is doing great, keep up the great work.
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Thank you very much for the review friend! It's my first book hehehe, I've written poetry before but never got around to publishing it. I noticed this issue of slow development, it's kind of frustrating for me that only write as a hobby, but I'm trying not to force my self, I'm taking this book more as a learning process than anything else, and aside from the usual frustrations, I'm loving it ! I hope I can learn even more from this so that I can create stories with much higher quality in the future! Thanks so much for reading, having someone review my work positively makes my day!
You should write a “shameless” review where readers could ask question and you could give a better glimpse into what they’ll get hooked into
sounds like a good idea, I'll do that later hehehe
