Review Detail of Daoist_Dan in Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Item: Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
Rating: 3

Review detail

Daoist_DanLv1011mthDaoist_Dan

The mc sucks. A fantasy about smoking weed and being a loner. Also being a super awesome biker in Twilight. Not seeing much personality besides that. Not even hints of a more interesting one :/ Would've stuck around to give it a better chance, but when I saw the story wasted our time describing him selling weed it was too hard to ignore what this was about. Writing Quality - 3 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

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Destiny_henry_1762Lv13Destiny_henry_1762

guys you are just dissing someone's else work, if you don't like it then it's good. then say so, to me the work is great, I like weed and when the mutated weed came out I laughed cos I found it funny

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AstralNinja420Lv14AstralNinja420

You my sir are garbage

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Daoist_DanLv10Daoist_Dan

Can I be fresh garbage then? At least 4 other people clicked the review.

AstralNinja420:You my sir are garbage

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LastGodLv4LastGod

thanks i was gonna waste my time on this

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AkGreybackLv2AkGreyback

Dude the story is not fully even started yet, Mc will get more time for development

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HakujoLv4Hakujo

the author should have considered "first impressions" if there will be such thing

AkGreyback:Dude the story is not fully even started yet, Mc will get more time for development

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StarGazerrLv4StarGazerr

Agree, finally someone understands, they think that readers are forced to read and wait for the character to develop, and forget the basics of common sense

Hakujo:the author should have considered "first impressions" if there will be such thing

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Voided_foxLv3Voided_fox

First off dont you know you can find the twilight series in the fantasy section in the library? And you don’t like how he did it make your own or go back to reading Chinese novels ware the mc f**ks children

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Daoist_DanLv10Daoist_Dan

You definitely have some ideas. But I'm up here on the moon faking the landings. Can we discuss later?

Voided_fox:First off dont you know you can find the twilight series in the fantasy section in the library? And you don’t like how he did it make your own or go back to reading Chinese novels ware the mc f**ks children

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Voided_foxLv3Voided_fox

Sure but wach out for the alien-dolphins

Daoist_Dan:You definitely have some ideas. But I'm up here on the moon faking the landings. Can we discuss later?
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Weizenbrot14Lv4Weizenbrot14

reason because he was right? or because it is your dream? or is this your live in short discriped as a drug junkie?

AstralNinja420:You my sir are garbage

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Weizenbrot14Lv4Weizenbrot14

yeah like you? no thanks he should do more reviews and be helpful too people unlike you heh

Voided_fox:First off dont you know you can find the twilight series in the fantasy section in the library? And you don’t like how he did it make your own or go back to reading Chinese novels ware the mc f**ks children

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CrownClown666Lv4CrownClown666

We must've come across the same ones. They get dropped after a couple of chapters. Twilight fan fics have the shortest lifespan in webnovel.

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Petty_TrollLv10Petty_Troll

1 it's a review your supposed to be honest when making a review 2 that makes me wanna read it less compared to this review

Destiny_henry_1762:guys you are just dissing someone's else work, if you don't like it then it's good. then say so, to me the work is great, I like weed and when the mutated weed came out I laughed cos I found it funny

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AdramelechLv15Adramelech

8/10 likelihood of being dropped for no reason even when they are really good and with no warning

CrownClown666:We must've come across the same ones. They get dropped after a couple of chapters. Twilight fan fics have the shortest lifespan in webnovel.
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