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AstralNinja420

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2020-09-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4203h
    Commented

    Hell yeah

    Ch 149 Chapter 148 is his Conqueror's So Terrifying? ?
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    One Piece : Comparison Broadcast
    Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42016h
    Commented

    Dude he has only one Pokémon and even then he would win

    Ch 55 Chapter 55: Birch Research Institute
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    Pokemon: I'm a Farmer
    Anime & Comics · RockyRoad891
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4202d
    Commented

    Well they signed their death warrents

    Ch 212 Chapter 211
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    Mangaka in the StrawHats
    Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4202d
    Posted

    End this story or yourself dawg because it is stupid like I get it and the title an all but like give someone more useful but won’t be useful in the grand line like how luffy’s crew was pretty strong for east blue then barely able to compete with the first half of the grandline do a crew slightly worst than that and bada bing bada boom worst crew in one piece your isn’t the worst it is straight ass like straight double do’s useless

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    One Piece: My Crew Is Trash!
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4202d
    Commented

    Dude that is stupid

    Ch 124 Chapter 119
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    Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion
    Movies · harsh07
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4207d
    Replied to That_One_Dead_Ali

    Bruh ask him if he wants a drink or food if not then laser and cat nip it is

    You know what, last chapter was way too dramatic for no reason. And you know me, I don't like unnecessary drama. Especially not when I'm going with the lighthearted route with this story. I'mma rewrite last chapter into just a friendly spar instead of a dramatic scolding by a talking tiger lol. Here, have a realistic Rath pic has compensation:
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    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
    Anime & Comics · That_One_Dead_Ali
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4208d
    Commented

    Have luffy diss them

    Ch 235 Chapter 235 - Enies Lobby 12!
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    One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
    Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42010d
    Commented

    Meh kinda more so of didn’t like it cause of how he gave them

    Ch 57 Chapter 57
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    Pokémon Breeder In One Piece!
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42012d
    Posted

    It has potential but it is so damn boring I can’t barely read it for one and for two Riki wouldn’t force someone to play basketball so forcing him to play ruins the story as a whole

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    The Knight of Seirin
    Anime & Comics · Orrlex
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42012d
    Commented

    Boring

    Ch 9 Recruitment Two
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    Ben 10/MCU
    Movies · Shane_Delgado_03
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42015d
    Posted

    You shouldn’t make Tao lung evil because I like how he was previously but going on a journey to find his path would’ve been better

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    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42018d
    Commented

    Make him trash hal

    Ch 6 The Sister Universe DC
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    Card Maker System
    Anime & Comics · Ender_Child
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42022d
    Replied to Jared_Anderson

    End it

    Ch 119 Chapter 114 : Vulture
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    Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion
    Movies · harsh07
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42022d
    Commented

    Luffy: so what Everyone else: whatttttt

    Ch 50 50. I Am Whitebeard
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    One Piece: A Different Luffy
    Anime & Comics · GregariousLion
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42023d
    Commented

    Make the black text like the normal text

    Ch 1 Starting Pack - Ultra Instinct
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    Transmigrated as Goten: Start Bonus - Ultra Instinct
    Anime & Comics · Sniperwoof
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42023d
    Commented

    Call him nox or Corvus

    Ch 5 The Evolved Ten Shadows.
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    Toji Fushiguro: Young Justice(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja42029d
    Commented

    Just kill sauron

    Ch 52 Machine Man 50 : Savage Land King
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    Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.
    Movies · shinydecapod
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4201mth
    Replied to AstralNinja420

    Get rid of the story that is what the author need

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    Reborn in MCU as Doctor Stephen Strange
    Movies · ImagineFiction
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4201mth
    Posted

    Mcu never had mutants and really instead of Tony stark it’s Tony stain nah bro correct your story

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    Reborn in MCU as Doctor Stephen Strange
    Movies · ImagineFiction
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  • AstralNinja420
    AstralNinja4201mth
    Commented

    Pe not d so you get coupe de burst

    Ch 35 NEW SHIP
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    One piece:Monster zero(COMPLETE)
    Anime & Comics · Baya_baya
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