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ChaddtsLv11yr
2023-12-20 07:09

It's plenty a readable bog standard Isekai. With a few issues. First the story, isn't tagged correctly at all. It's not even in the fanfiction category of webnovel. Secondly, it's an Isekai, yet the m.c behaves like a child. His motivations, attitude, expectations. It's all over the place, and not consistent. The character building and stuff was rushed way too much. The bare minimum was done before graduation. We don't get to see him doing anything exceptional on his own, or even get a real understanding of his family backgroung. This is even more concerning when he appears to only be half uzumaki. We get very little world building, the story mostly relies on generalities and the anime as help.

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