Hey author, a piece of advice from a persistent fan, don't try to rush to finish the story, I've seen that in your stories you show very rapid development, you don't clarify how the relationships of the characters end, you leave a lot of content that you could use without using, I really like your stories but when I read them I feel like I see a quick summary of the story you must of the story itself, don't stop writing or die as I said I like your stories but they are too short for what an example should be It's the previous story you did from Steven Universe

It's very interesting so far. I will be waiting for new chapters, I hope they will not be abandoned............................................................................

This is a well made story. Even though it just started i can tell that this will be an amazing story to invest in. The dark tone mixed with comedy and characters that could convince you that they’re real people. Plus the main characters subtle undertone of insanity in the way it thinks and talks. I truly love it all. My question is, what’s with the sudden and random switch in languages? I don’t know what it’s for. is it a plot point, foreshadowing, a simple mistake? I would’ve just preferred if we had a heads up about something that could very well ruin any and all immersion in your story.

A very good and fun fanfic to read honestly, I Iove the MC and his personality, the overall writing is nice as well, I'm a little sad though since this fanfic has probably been dropped 🥲

I need more 😭😭 ............................

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