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DemonoidKing
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2023-04-17 05:09

This is a well made story. Even though it just started i can tell that this will be an amazing story to invest in. The dark tone mixed with comedy and characters that could convince you that they’re real people. Plus the main characters subtle undertone of insanity in the way it thinks and talks. I truly love it all. My question is, what’s with the sudden and random switch in languages? I don’t know what it’s for. is it a plot point, foreshadowing, a simple mistake? I would’ve just preferred if we had a heads up about something that could very well ruin any and all immersion in your story.

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