Review Detail of RyujiSakamata in Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

This is lit for real! The chapters clearly have a purpose. The pacing is well-balanced and is easy to follow, no info dumps and descriptive stalls. The quotations of thought and speech have been clearly differentiated. What amazes me is the engaging and immersive sentences. There's almost no passive voice; every paragraph has its elements of engagement. The worldbuilding descriptions are also in the right amount with no excess or lacking. Having the western classic style, no beginner can create and edit this masterpiece without studying literature. This is a work of a pro. I added it to my colls to further read it. I didn't comment to the plot because I wanna explore the story further.