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RyujiSakamata

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2023-01-24 JoinedJapan
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  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamata6 months ago
    Posted

    Truly a captivating story. Your story is far mysterious, which makes me curious. There's this secret organization and inheritance stuff, it will catch the interest of the cultivation reader's interest.

  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamata7 months ago
    Posted

    Great story! Can't wait on how the brothers will manage to escape after the incident. Chap 7 now, it's currently in the running away 'phase.' I'll like to know more what will happen soon.

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    RyujiSakamata7 months ago
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    RyujiSakamata7 months ago
    Replied to UelUel

    Hey cat-eared man, that comment is true

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  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamataa year ago
    Replied to AGooseEgg

    Updates Every Wed-Thu 8:00 PM GMT+8 Btw, thank you for reading! [img=recommend]

  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamataa year ago
    Replied to Reader_Rillas

    I'm posting on Royal Road, Scribble Hub, and Honeyfeed as alternatives.

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  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamataa year ago
    Replied to Reader_Rillas

    I don't have socials yet, but I'm posting weekly. I'm still focusing on my other story so I can't continue this series yet, but I already plotted half of all character backgrounds.

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  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamata2 years ago
    Replied to B4lth

    Thank you for being so helpful in hunting down the present tense in my work. You saved much of my time searching for those. By the way, may I ask if you have further readings or articles about the tenses of verbs in creative writing? I would like to study further about proofreading and further improve my and others' work too.

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  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamata2 years ago
    Posted

    I like the concept of the story, even though there's a huge info dump at the start. I can tell that the author crafter the world background with huge effort. There are some confusing dialogues and grammatical errors, but it can be fixed with re-edit. I hope I could see more of your story since I'm also writing a story about elves. Good job, author!

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  • RyujiSakamata
    RyujiSakamata2 years ago
    Commented

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