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Flooksan
FlooksanLv111yr
2023-10-15 22:09

This novel is too detailed and detailed to the point of being annoying. Even more detailed than the original novel. (I'm not being sarcastic.) But I was able to get through it by skipping the content. But I found a new problem that I didn't like when entering the world of akame ga kill. You said you couldn't tolerate cruelty. and want to stop this cruelty and flirt with esdeath And it makes me feel miserable Because it's tagged as a villain and the mc's personality is annoying and I don't have a problem with your age because I've read many Chinese fanfics. Many of the akame ga kill Chinese fanfics I've read are better than yours. again I can't believe you can write worse than Chinese nationalists. And I've read akame ga kill fanfiction that starts in the North like you. But the way to approach esdeath is still much better and interesting. You start out like a villain, but you end up acting like a virginal anti-hero who has never seen cruelty. Your novel is boring. Your novel has a few advantages. 1) There are more episodes than other fan fiction stories of this type. 2) MC op 3) MC is lucky.

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Plan_C
Plan_CLv4

Mind sharing the title of the one which started in the north?

Argent1971
Argent1971Lv4

Mind sharing the esdeath north one name

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