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2023-08-24 13:15

I don't think the author understand the flow, logic and pacing of the OG Solo level world. The author keeps adding elements to the system and stated that it's still the same system in the original, but isn't the purpose of the system is to transfer the power of ashborn to jinwoo, and the system's source is ashborn himself, why does an Elderitch path is in the system? It doesn't make sense. It would make sense if the author add his own system and combined it with the OG system, but he says it's the same as the OG so it doesn't make sense. And the very noticeable mistakes a lot of authors do in fanfics, is that they just copy the original and make or add some elements to the story while not understanding the OG story. The mc has a lot of mana in the beginning but it just shows in the mana reader that he has only 10, and it doesn't even give explanation why it hid his real mana. It just doesn't make sense.

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GodOfGreedAs
GodOfGreedAsAuthor

Yes it's not the og system and it is at the same time the being who sent him here modified the system

GodOfGreedAs
GodOfGreedAsAuthor

The start was my own mistake

ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv4

well it is not the same as og well might be due to a higher being interference in the start and he isn't the og jinwoo and moreover this is a fanfic so if everything is same what will be the fun to read it and it goes boring if it will be te same as original and author did try something on his on

ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv4

well it makes this fanfic interesting as who wants to read the same as in original and keep it up author 😁 really love this fanfic

GodOfGreedAs:Yes it's not the og system and it is at the same time the being who sent him here modified the system
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