Item: The Huntress and her Lion
Rating: 3.4
Author: Sample_Text_2389

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2024-08-04 02:33

I really like the story so far, but I think if you want to continue this story, you REALLY need to think up a different "MacGuffin" that forces her to attend Hogwarts. The mere idea of the wizarding government holding the capability of just randomly and remotely stripping people of their magic is so ridiculous, that it essentially invalidates every conflict in the world of Harry Potter. Voldemort, Grindelwald or any of their followers, they could never become a threat because by your logic, they could just strip their magic when they break the law, or pass laws specifically against them.

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