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Rias + Serafall (she's almost as chaotic as the mc)

Sounds great

Yes

Honestly the whole OC goddess characters you come up with are the worst part of your stories.

Who the absolute fuck is "Haruto"? I mean obviously Kakashi, but what the hell is up with that random ass name?

Ok, at this point this is just plain stupid. So in this universe everyone is just incompetent? The most powerful and experienced members of the village can't see through a basic, academy level illusion (the transformation technique)? No one senses that she has a ridiculous amount of chakra? Not one Hyuuga took a look at her?

I mean I fully agree with Kaguya not being completely evil, but wasn't the canonical reason for her being sealed instead of killed, that she physically CAN'T be killed?

Not going to lie, I was originally hesitant to read this, because based on the summary I assumed that the "hero" she would train would be Bell, which had honestly been done to death already, but I was very pleasantly surprised by who it actually was. Overall, so far it's been a great story, and a perfect example of how to write an OP mc, (in this particular case by focusing more on character interaction and humor). Honestly my only complaint is I wish it would update more often.

Really? So it's a character based on Tiamat, the primal DRAGON goddess of life, without an ounce of dragon in her? Also her entire build basically screams support character.

Except, that the chakra isn't lost. In the episode where Kakashi was explaining his training plan to Naruto, he describes that after dispersal, most of the chakra returns to the user, carrying the memories, and physical and mental exhaustion of the clone.