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Review Detail of Jasonenrick in Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv132mthJasonenrick

The reason is very simple: Your world-building and consistency is crumbling the more I read ahead. And this is one, if not the biggest problem, a story can have. And you managed to do this quite often. Just by logical thinking many things make no sense and the biggest problem you have is trying to make your Mc seem overpowered and then introducing lousy excuses for others to be as powerful as him. For example: Annable managed to get from Peak Tier 0 to Low Tier 1 Lord, the same rank as Michael even thought he only went from Lowest to Low Tier 1 Lord. What did Michael have to do to achieve this: Kill thousands upon thousands of Tier 1 Monsters and dozen of Tier 2 Monsters. My question: What the hell did she do? Kill some Tier 3 ? Sure........ Makes no sense at all. Like I said, no consistency and making up random things to keep the story alive.

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Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

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Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv13Jasonenrick

Wanted to add something that I just noticed now.....Why do his soul traits not get stronger? It was shown that other people could get insanely stronger by having more Links of Loyalty as was shown in the first assessment, but apparently, this isn't the case for the Mc because there aren't any improvements shown.