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OliverfINKing
OliverfINKingAuthor2yr
2023-04-27 17:40

I'd say my main goal for the novel is to write the most interesting and various personalities possible. I want any relevant character to be unique in a way, so I'd wish the reader to enjoy the psychological side of the story first and foremost. If you find errors or have advice, comment about them and I'll probably edit it right in 1-day max or try to implement the idea. I hope you'll enjoy the story.

Vengeful Domination

OliverfINKing
4.6
145 Chs

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Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4

that synapse doesn't even make sense to the end,did a five year old proof read it

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OliverfINKing
OliverfINKingAuthor

First of all, thank you for the feedback. English is not my first language so I'm sure my grammar isn't perfect. For proofreading, I'm mainly relying on Grammarly. In the synopsis, I tried mainly to arouse the curiosity of the possible reader. If you have already read the first chapter and find the way it's written unclear, I would ask you to go into more actionable details. Even though I'll try to improve the how I find interesting seeing any possible natural improvement in my writing style in the next future. I hope you'll be there when that happens! Have a great day👋

Shadow_Gamer1:that synapse doesn't even make sense to the end,did a five year old proof read it
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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

What I'm tired of is Mc's villains and without morals.

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Marianne_2020
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This novel is truly amazing, the author has a great deal of command over words which gets you to hook up, amazing story development and plots can't wait to finish it.

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Kara_wish_writes
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The writing style is great, especially the poetic start. The characters are a bit foggy though there are parts that are not well explained but I guess it will get better as the story progresses on. Also, the plot of rebirth for a goddess's revenge is interesting.

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Lunarclock
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I haven't read a single word Abt this webnovel but I sure hope that I won't be wrong

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KayIsBored_1
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noice :-)

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Indespair
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This is a solid novel with an interesting and unique plot. Props to the author for trying something completely new. It's refreshing to see a book that doesn't follow the same tired tropes as so many other novels in this genre. I'm excited to see where the story goes from here.

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Dark_Cosmos
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This is the first time I have given someone a 5 star rating. The story, the characters, the world building, everything is great. I hope it becomes a great story. My best wishes to you.

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Zeroce
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The first and second chapters were like any other reincarnation novel. It's after the third chapter that the story gets interesting; also, from the beginning, you can tell that the story contains a huge mystery plot. To anyone who is reading this review, I hope you read the first 10 chapters before you decide anything; once you have, you will see that the writer has done a very good job describing everything in the novel.

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eudine
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Your writing is simply incredible! I love how you fleshed out the characters and the plot; it’s quite unique, really. The only thing I’d have to critique is the occassional grammar mistakes. Other than that, keep up the great work!

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Bankets
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The story is captivating from beginning to end of the chapters. The characters are interesting too. The writing style was beautiful and eloquent, adding to the overall beauty of the story.

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