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goffyboy
goffyboyLv32yr
2023-04-18 10:11

This story is filled with mystery for me. Like how did Mc become who he is? And his personality is flesh. Not like other series.

Vengeful Domination

OliverfINKing
4.6
145 Chs

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OliverfINKing
OliverfINKingAuthor

The mistery is voluntary and should(maybe🙃) decrease progressing with the story. For the personality part:since this is my first novel, I was surprised too how much of writing is actually self writing. The best part is all of it happens uncounsciously searching for a character relatable but interesting at the same time! Apart from my rant on my unexpected therapy/writing hobby😅, I hope you'll keep reading!

2yr
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OliverfINKing
OliverfINKingAuthor

I'd say my main goal for the novel is to write the most interesting and various personalities possible. I want any relevant character to be unique in a way, so I'd wish the reader to enjoy the psychological side of the story first and foremost. If you find errors or have advice, comment about them and I'll probably edit it right in 1-day max or try to implement the idea. I hope you'll enjoy the story.

2yr

Marianne_2020
Marianne_2020Lv4

This novel is truly amazing, the author has a great deal of command over words which gets you to hook up, amazing story development and plots can't wait to finish it.

1yr
Kara_wish_writes
Kara_wish_writesLv12

The writing style is great, especially the poetic start. The characters are a bit foggy though there are parts that are not well explained but I guess it will get better as the story progresses on. Also, the plot of rebirth for a goddess's revenge is interesting.

2yr
Lunarclock
LunarclockLv13

I haven't read a single word Abt this webnovel but I sure hope that I won't be wrong

1yr
KayIsBored_1
KayIsBored_1Lv4

noice :-)

1yr
Indespair
IndespairLv4

This is a solid novel with an interesting and unique plot. Props to the author for trying something completely new. It's refreshing to see a book that doesn't follow the same tired tropes as so many other novels in this genre. I'm excited to see where the story goes from here.

1yr
Dark_Cosmos
Dark_CosmosLv3

This is the first time I have given someone a 5 star rating. The story, the characters, the world building, everything is great. I hope it becomes a great story. My best wishes to you.

2yr
Zeroce
ZeroceLv2

The first and second chapters were like any other reincarnation novel. It's after the third chapter that the story gets interesting; also, from the beginning, you can tell that the story contains a huge mystery plot. To anyone who is reading this review, I hope you read the first 10 chapters before you decide anything; once you have, you will see that the writer has done a very good job describing everything in the novel.

2yr
eudine
eudineLv13

Your writing is simply incredible! I love how you fleshed out the characters and the plot; it’s quite unique, really. The only thing I’d have to critique is the occassional grammar mistakes. Other than that, keep up the great work!

2yr
Bankets
BanketsLv3

The story is captivating from beginning to end of the chapters. The characters are interesting too. The writing style was beautiful and eloquent, adding to the overall beauty of the story.

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