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pfoley
pfoleyLv131yr
2023-12-16 16:31

There is no internal logic, nor consistency in levels of strength in the story. In one paragraph the MC can be both average and inconceivably exceptional in the same area.The phrasing of some paragraphs can also require some re-reads or creative interpretation to figure out what they may mean.Overall, it may be diverting if you have a lot of free time, but not worth spending a cent on.

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