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2024-10-23 09:16

It's a pretty good story but one thing that confuses me is that in the first chapter it says he gets his cheat due to good karma. So apparently in his previous life he must have been a somewhat decent person at least, yet he has absolutely 0 hesitation in murdering, mutilating, and performing all sorts of horrible experiments on both innocent people and children like this guy would fit right in with Danzo and Orochimaru at their worst and maybe even surpasses them. The story even explains that despite all the templates he's offered sharing the fact that they're from characters that are crazy he won't be infected by that craziness, yet the MC is clearly a psychopath or maybe a sociopath one of those.

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yeah but he could also be one of those that just does good things because he doesn't care that he's helping people he cares about the benefits like he helped a girl that's good but oh the girl just so happens to be rich or he's boss now he has money or a promotion something like that. idk if explained it well or not

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