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Luxuriant
LuxuriantAuthor1yr
2023-04-13 00:17

So I’m the writer and I think it’s pretty good? If you have any questions, let me know! That’s it~ Luxuriant

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nikita_vdovin
nikita_vdovinLv1

I liked what you write. but I have a suggestion or, most likely, a remark: the main character is a general who received the rank for nothing. I consider it necessary that the main character went through a complicated course and it was said, in the text it was described fairly uniformly, as if he was an ordinary clone, the boiler would be a meat killing machine. and the second is his partly childish or, I can even say, stupid behavior and bickering. after all, he can be removed from the post of general due to incompetence or he will be "killed", and Palpatine will simply hide him in his laboratories for research.

Luxuriant
LuxuriantAuthor

While I see where your coming from, you have to remember that in the first battle of Geonosis, none of the clones had real war experience and that their ranks were most likely chosen based off there performance in training. Since they were the first clones to be enlisted and to add to the fact that the first battle of Geonosis was completley unexpected/ rushed, the Republic had to give automatic command to Jedi, while automatically giving skilled clone troopers, rank Commander and etc, in order for them to serve/assist the Jedi. To summarize what I’m tryna say, the MC is as skilled as any other Jedi Master and to add to the fact that he can use the force just as skilled also. He was clearly above the capabilities of any clone commander and in turn was given his postion automatically based off his training merits. Just like how in canon, colored armored clones were automatically given a rank for nothing, but most likely based off there training since they had no prior experience. Hope this clears it up!

nikita_vdovin:I liked what you write. but I have a suggestion or, most likely, a remark: the main character is a general who received the rank for nothing. I consider it necessary that the main character went through a complicated course and it was said, in the text it was described fairly uniformly, as if he was an ordinary clone, the boiler would be a meat killing machine. and the second is his partly childish or, I can even say, stupid behavior and bickering. after all, he can be removed from the post of general due to incompetence or he will be "killed", and Palpatine will simply hide him in his laboratories for research.
Ghost_prince1393
Ghost_prince1393Lv4

Author will you continue your other stories

Luxuriant
LuxuriantAuthor

I’ve said on my other stories that their on long term hiatus for now. I’ve also been trying to find one story to focus on and this one seems most comfortable and likable for me. So for now I will be focusing on this one.

Ghost_prince1393:Author will you continue your other stories
Nightskin_Mystic
Nightskin_MysticLv14

You have the Romance tag can I ask who the pairing.

Luxuriant
LuxuriantAuthor

Nightskin_Mystic:You have the Romance tag can I ask who the pairing.
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Author I love the premise but too few chapters are out….Can you slave away with unpaid labor and make 40 chapters within the next 24 hours just for me?

Luxuriant:
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Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

Okay, will it be a harem or just one or two girls

Luxuriant:
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Luxuriant
LuxuriantAuthor

For now I’m sticking with one girl but might put it up too two in the future, not 100% yet.

Kono_Timoda:Okay, will it be a harem or just one or two girls
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

Why notake it two, the logistics of having two girls in starwars makes sense.

Luxuriant:For now I’m sticking with one girl but might put it up too two in the future, not 100% yet.
NeilDraco
NeilDracoLv13

So I have an idea the mc needs a squad right how about the bad batch

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

Did you die?

_Bruh
_BruhLv13

"The strongest Anime System" is plagiarized the original is called "The Divine Anime System" by Reili on Webnovel

Infinite_Shadow_57:Did you die?
Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

_Bruh:"The strongest Anime System" is plagiarized the original is called "The Divine Anime System" by Reili on Webnovel
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