Review Detail of Mohsen in Villain in the world of Naruto

I like the story for the most part and it's fine but the writing quality and just the way some chapters are formatted definitely needs a rework. I definitely suggest author to finish up whatever arc and then go on a slight hiatus just to rewrite the story. Some parts could definitely have been touched up on or just simply removed. mc also doesn't ask some certain questions that even a child would. There is a female system assistant that arrives at around chapter 26-27. It isn't a complete waifu system though as the system has been shown to be deceitful.