Item: Villain in the world of Naruto
Rating: 4.4
Author: Mohsen

MohsenLv41yr

2023-06-06 18:18

I like the story for the most part and it's fine but the writing quality and just the way some chapters are formatted definitely needs a rework. I definitely suggest author to finish up whatever arc and then go on a slight hiatus just to rewrite the story. Some parts could definitely have been touched up on or just simply removed. mc also doesn't ask some certain questions that even a child would. There is a female system assistant that arrives at around chapter 26-27. It isn't a complete waifu system though as the system has been shown to be deceitful.

Villain in the world of Naruto

_DilLen

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_DilLenAuthor

Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice and work on finalizing the story after I finish the Konoha arc.

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