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2023-05-27 23:42

Reading the first chapter had me hooked. It truly is a lovely story. There are a few things in the first chapter that need to be fixed, aside from that it is a 5/5 for me. Good luck, author! 👍🏻

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Thank you for the kind words .. I have pen down your corrections about the book I really do appreciate your review a lot .. You can keep on reading, if you do find the book captivating

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