Item: TILL I DIE IVY
Rating: 4.8

002_Yuki_OnnaLv31yr

2023-04-19 22:12

First of all, lovely book cover. I truly loved it. Next about the synopsis, it was pretty good and fast-paced. But it could've been better, nevertheless, it gives us an idea about what the story has in it for us. The beginning starts with violent and disturbing imagery, then transitions to a philosophical reflection on death and reincarnation, and then shifts again to a revenge plot. Cool, I would say. Overall from all the chapters I've read, In terms of writing style, there are some grammar and punctuation errors, and some sentences could benefit from better structure and clarity. But let me tell you, this author got a lot of ideas about how to make some good drama. So peeps whoever is looking for an aggressive drama this one is for you. The story is enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

TILL I DIE IVY

Jovialjune

4.7

49 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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RainandstormLv2

Thanks so much for the review .. You don't just know how much you have made my day with this, thanks 💞💞... I would also try to correct the grammar errors as well, overall am really so grateful.. Please do keep on reading to find out what happens next .. Also you can please support me with gifts and power stones as well

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002_Yuki_OnnaLv3

T_T for now I am broke. But once I get stones I will surely give you :D

Rainandstorm:Thanks so much for the review .. You don't just know how much you have made my day with this, thanks 💞💞... I would also try to correct the grammar errors as well, overall am really so grateful.. Please do keep on reading to find out what happens next .. Also you can please support me with gifts and power stones as well

1yr

RainandstormLv2

Thanks so much, I am really so grateful 💗💗 Please do keep your promise

002_Yuki_Onna:T_T for now I am broke. But once I get stones I will surely give you :D

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