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JessicaShelton
JessicaSheltonLv141yr
2023-05-01 13:37

Jovialjune the idea of your writing is fantastic. Not many people can write this type (It have lots of emotions). There are errors which your fans add in suggestions in the comments for each sentence you have to look at it to improve. I give you all 5 stars because it's an encouragement for you to improve further don't be discouraged. 🤗

TILL I DIE IVY

Jovialjune
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Rainandstorm
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Thanks so much for your review, You really don't know how much this means to be 🥲🥲... I am really so grateful for your support and encouragement As for the errors, I'll do my best in re-reading all the chapters to correct the errors in there. Please do keep on reading my book, to find out what happens. Once again, thanks for the support🙏🙏

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ANURAG_SAHARAN
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Good story, chapters are less but still it get me hooked. Please upload more. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update] Definitely give it read[img=recommend]

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OrbitAround
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Definitely recommend! It been long time I was reading romance story and here goes my top ten list, the story start with some backstory that make you want to know more what happen next in future. the characters was interesting and the plot was your typical romance story, except it cause you with cliffhangers feelings. Good job and a good work, Author!

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002_Yuki_Onna
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First of all, lovely book cover. I truly loved it. Next about the synopsis, it was pretty good and fast-paced. But it could've been better, nevertheless, it gives us an idea about what the story has in it for us. The beginning starts with violent and disturbing imagery, then transitions to a philosophical reflection on death and reincarnation, and then shifts again to a revenge plot. Cool, I would say. Overall from all the chapters I've read, In terms of writing style, there are some grammar and punctuation errors, and some sentences could benefit from better structure and clarity. But let me tell you, this author got a lot of ideas about how to make some good drama. So peeps whoever is looking for an aggressive drama this one is for you. The story is enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

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Deborah_13
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Only seven chapters yet this book got me hooked already. The starting was somewhat captivating, looking forward to more chapters

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The_Lonely_Guy
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First things first, The cover looks just great... It's alluring. As for the story, it is engaging, with decently paced plot and nice characters. And to top it off, the grammar is way above the standard. A nice read and I hope the author releases new chapters daily. Good luck, author-san

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Okay, the first chapter looks great especially the way his aunty scared him. This is an interesting book but the dialogue needs to be fixed. Kudos to the author.

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Flattened_Rice_007
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A good read for those who like dramatic and spicy teen romance. Nice writing by the author.

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OldNispy
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The first parts is fine. It will be an interesting read to those who love spicy, conflicted, dramatic romance stories. Nice job author!

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HeatherReader
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This was quite a good read! Some grammar mistakes but otherwise ok

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JellyFlayvr
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I was intrigued from the very first page. There's suspense and shocking twists at every turn. The characters came to life with their vibrant personalities and engaging dialogue. There are some typos and grammatical errors, but despite that I'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to continue reading :)

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