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2023-04-26 09:48

Hello Author! Let me get this straight guys, I have practically zero knowledge in football(:soccer) expect that there will be two teams scoring goals by Kick the ball into opponent net. That's it. But I have always enjoyed reading sports novel, and I have also read couple of sports novel before. So I once again tried this novel and guess what? It was good! Especially the matches were a lot intriguing. As of now 19chapters were published, and I thoroughly enjoyed them. But I ask the author to clarify MC background story a little. You haven't mentioned or given much of any MC character traits. Even the #tag transmigration is somewhat confusing and I am probably guessing that MC really is a transmigrated if not it's kind of unbelievable how calm he was when he received a system out of no where. That it. All the best Author!

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HarukiSensei
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1. My mistake. I have removed that tag. 2. You were also be calm when you read hundreds of system novels. You will become numb and didn't feel much excited as when you read your first system novel XD. (guess I should have mention that) 3. I will explore Aran's character little by little as this book move on.

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N_RRLv4

So he is not a reincarnation either, but you mentioned of him having clear memories from 2 years when was baby though?

HarukiSensei:1. My mistake. I have removed that tag. 2. You were also be calm when you read hundreds of system novels. You will become numb and didn't feel much excited as when you read your first system novel XD. (guess I should have mention that) 3. I will explore Aran's character little by little as this book move on.
HarukiSensei
HarukiSenseiAuthor

Which chapter? I can't remember where I mentioned this.

N_RR:So he is not a reincarnation either, but you mentioned of him having clear memories from 2 years when was baby though?
N_RR
N_RRLv4

I am not sure either but something like watching Messi from when he was 2

HarukiSensei:Which chapter? I can't remember where I mentioned this.
HarukiSensei
HarukiSenseiAuthor

Oh then you misunderstood. I said in past 2 years when Barcalona and Mesci is not playing well.

N_RR:I am not sure either but something like watching Messi from when he was 2
N_RR
N_RRLv4

I guess it's all my wrong assumption. . . . Thanks for the answers. . . . Waiting for next chapters.

HarukiSensei:Oh then you misunderstood. I said in past 2 years when Barcalona and Mesci is not playing well.
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