This has potential. I don’t mind the misspelling since it’s on purpose.

Me encanta la novela y espero que a todos les guste como ami 😘los quiero a todos y que le vaya bien y al autor que siga mejorando en todo lo que pueda

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This novel is very good, playing in Barcelona with Messi and quickly becoming GOAT with the help of a system. I like the fast pace that he has, the excellent spelling, fluency of words, well-described emotions, passionate and real football, Dembele is overrated. As for the National Team, will you play with your idol Messi in Argentina, helping him fulfill his greatest dream and desire?

as a barcelona fan and a football enthusiast in general i like this very much. keep up the good work author.

lost of potential the author just need to improve their grammar and do some quality touch ups but overall very goodd book with tons of potential

I've read the first 21 chapters and i have to say it's a fun read

Hello Author! Let me get this straight guys, I have practically zero knowledge in football(:soccer) expect that there will be two teams scoring goals by Kick the ball into opponent net. That's it. But I have always enjoyed reading sports novel, and I have also read couple of sports novel before. So I once again tried this novel and guess what? It was good! Especially the matches were a lot intriguing. As of now 19chapters were published, and I thoroughly enjoyed them. But I ask the author to clarify MC background story a little. You haven't mentioned or given much of any MC character traits. Even the #tag transmigration is somewhat confusing and I am probably guessing that MC really is a transmigrated if not it's kind of unbelievable how calm he was when he received a system out of no where. That it. All the best Author!

I love the story and the strict focus on football is very entertaining. The only thing that kinda threw me off was the lack of a world when the story started. He starts in the club and a game or two goes by before he even goes home or has any friends. I just feel like sports should be combined with slice of life to really bring out the best in both worlds. With that said, interesting chapters and good writing really attracts attention. I waiting for more, hope you keep updating.