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Dixerqua
DixerquaLv31yr
2023-08-11 16:18

I'd like to offer my honest review. Firstly, I must commend the novel's beginning, which is undeniably a perfect 10 out of 10 for its ability to instantly engage the reader. The utilization of multiple points of view is well-executed, a feat that is certainly challenging, so kudos to the author for achieving it seamlessly. Lastly, the writing style deserves praise for being smooth and easy to follow.

The Silver General: An Unlikely Love Story

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Hellheim
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To he author, I've been reading this book since it only had two chapters, though it could sound like am impatient but could you speed up the relationship between Reyan and Elena, I mean they've known each other for a while and there hasn't been much development. Other than that I'd say that this book is awesome and could be a hit

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Amina_Balanya
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Well this is my first book and to be honest I'm kinda having fun with it and am giving myself a good review cause if I don't like my own book then I shouldn't expect others to like it too.

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LuRai
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Writing Quality: I am not a big fan of the first-person view just because it has many flaws. But you did a great job. That being said try to keep it to first person, I noticed it switch mid-way a couple of times which can become confusing. The flashbacks though rather than pov you can in the third person (just a suggestion for ease of writing) Also there's an overabundance of details for your first-person view, details are great but keep in mind the reality of someone talking or telling a story, it might not be as in-depth as you're doing. Story development: loving that everything isn't going super fast, definitely allows for character growth and development, loving the gore! Character design: love love love the characters, so adorable. I love the cold personality obscured by childhood trauma and the innocent unknowing process. one of my favorite troupes. Overall great job looking forward to the next chapters :D

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