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TheOtherNoble
TheOtherNobleLv41yr
2023-07-27 00:11

Writing in first person from multiple POVs is a daunting challenge for most authors. The effort put into this story is clearly significant, and ultimately pays off. The violence may be a bit much for squeamish readers, but the characters are well-designed and the plot seems like it has a clear trajectory. Keep up the good work, Author!

The Silver General: An Unlikely Love Story

Charming_liar
4.7
36 Chs

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Charming_liar
Charming_liarAuthor

Um to be honest I didn't really expect you to review here so thank you

1yr
TheOtherNoble
TheOtherNobleLv4

You’re welcome! You should be really proud of your effort so far!

Charming_liar:Um to be honest I didn't really expect you to review here so thank you
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Charming_liar
Charming_liarAuthor

Thank you

TheOtherNoble:You’re welcome! You should be really proud of your effort so far!
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Other Reviews
Hellheim
HellheimLv1

To he author, I've been reading this book since it only had two chapters, though it could sound like am impatient but could you speed up the relationship between Reyan and Elena, I mean they've known each other for a while and there hasn't been much development. Other than that I'd say that this book is awesome and could be a hit

1yr

Amina_Balanya
Amina_BalanyaLv1

I love how the author has used multiple povs and each pov is unique with different personalities, you can tell that it's difficult, well I know it's difficult for me.but there's some grammar mistakes here and there and the paragraphing can vary a bit but I can notice some gradual improvement as the story progresses but that's just my opinion.

1yr
BIG_BAD_WOLF2000
BIG_BAD_WOLF2000Lv3

Great novel with a stellar plot, the difficulty of writing a story with multiple POV's is something I can't even begin to imagine, I enjoyed my time reading it, please add more chapters.

1yr
Knightofthedead
KnightofthedeadLv1

Fantastic novel, the story is very interesting. I am dying to know what happened next. Please make more chapters as I want to know what happens next

1yr
Webstar3493
Webstar3493Lv3

it's a nice historical novel, the synopsis is not that detailed yet it was wonderful. sounds like this book will come out on top one day! Great job author ✨

1yr
Charming_liar
Charming_liarAuthor

Well this is my first book and to be honest I'm kinda having fun with it and am giving myself a good review cause if I don't like my own book then I shouldn't expect others to like it too.

1yr
LuRai
LuRaiLv2

Writing Quality: I am not a big fan of the first-person view just because it has many flaws. But you did a great job. That being said try to keep it to first person, I noticed it switch mid-way a couple of times which can become confusing. The flashbacks though rather than pov you can in the third person (just a suggestion for ease of writing) Also there's an overabundance of details for your first-person view, details are great but keep in mind the reality of someone talking or telling a story, it might not be as in-depth as you're doing. Story development: loving that everything isn't going super fast, definitely allows for character growth and development, loving the gore! Character design: love love love the characters, so adorable. I love the cold personality obscured by childhood trauma and the innocent unknowing process. one of my favorite troupes. Overall great job looking forward to the next chapters :D

1yr
Goddess1ofchaos
Goddess1ofchaosLv3

Generously if you ask me why I give this book a five stars vote, I'll tell you to try it. The switch of POVs makes it interesting. Keep going author, the novel has potential. Am eager to see how the story unfolds.

1yr
Dixerqua
DixerquaLv3

I'd like to offer my honest review. Firstly, I must commend the novel's beginning, which is undeniably a perfect 10 out of 10 for its ability to instantly engage the reader. The utilization of multiple points of view is well-executed, a feat that is certainly challenging, so kudos to the author for achieving it seamlessly. Lastly, the writing style deserves praise for being smooth and easy to follow.

1yr
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