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Sapphire_AceLv31yr
2023-07-02 08:27

To be honest this is pretty good so far. It's can be pretty funny, but it's a tinge bit difficult to read in parts. The development of the main character could be better and the writing fluidity and grammar can be improved just by simple editing. I do enjoy the thought put into the magic system, and the feel of an ero game is kind of there but it kind of incorporates real consequences vs someone just behind a screen able to redo it.

Cultivation God -My Harem

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This is actually a review though ! I picked my phone and decided to check Webnovel as i got a free time...and seeing that my book still keeps increasing with collections and ps, I’ve made it a target to write and the happy news is i might start publishing next week... Thank you all..

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God_Is_Blind
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I really don't trust novels where the author uses all his secondary accounts to promote his books. I've logged into all the accounts that qualify this and they are all the author's.

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Just the synopsis made me curious to read more.Gonna check the real chapters

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The fake reviews.....could have tried to make it seem believable........................................................................................

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its a very intriguing novel one that keeps you captivated, I just love it

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Very catchy and interesting synopsis. Keep it up Bernard.

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Blak_cherry
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The story is a good read. It just needs a bit of refining and I believe it will be better than it is now. I really like the mc so far, a character drawn from a lot of comic relief.

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A great story with lots of twists and turns. Keep up the good work.

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This hope for future chapter will not end in band one finger crossed Keep it up bro

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