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Master_of_Sleep
Master_of_SleepLv151yr
2023-08-08 03:39

interesting concept executed poorly, further hampered by low quality translation.

My Sword Intent Can Be Infinitely Improved

Writing For Ten Years
3.5
674 Chs

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Kubura_Aweni
Kubura_AweniLv1

I just want to inform everyone of this awesome novel. I feel like it needs more support. Truly a wonderful novel that am sure everyone would love. And the author's has more in store for us. I hope we can all give this novel a chance. For I also love this novel, and for people who will say paid to do this and so. I only love the novel that is why I am doing this. Thanks everyone that decides to try the novel after seeing this. The name of the novel is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled

1yr
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Inevitron
InevitronLv1

The story's good, but the MTL editor is absolutely rotten. Pronouns are all over the place and sentences have their meanings reversed or are sometimes just gibberish. While this is technically better than the poison produced by that godawful uploader whose username is a string of numbers, since that jackhole doesn't seem to even edit the MTL, it's still absolutely shameful that Webnovel is willing to post this terrible trash. Please do not pay money for garbage like this. Nobody involved in vomiting this "translation" onto the internet deserves it. There are plenty of novels out there written in coherent English you can read instead.

1yr

Gortox
GortoxLv5

Could've been good but poor translation as well as stretching the idea too far ruined it for me.

1yr
milind_walavalkar
milind_walavalkarLv4

Good Backstory and good writing. I really like the trial read and would love to see it get picked.

1yr
ikka
ikkaLv13

not for me!........ warning! you might lose braincells........

1yr
sergioh1t
sergioh1tLv13

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Friends101
Friends101Lv15

casual poison. don't bother if you don't wanna lose brain cells. I made it to Chapter 260 in raws.

1yr
Moist_Yoda
Moist_YodaLv14

this best rating i can give as the story was just garbage. The first problem is grammar. the second is writing quality. the third is repeating sentences just to fill the word count. which shows lacking skill in writing and shows us, the reader, you don't care about our experience. if i was told this was written by Ai, I wouldn't believe them as even bad ai can write better. this isn't 10 years ago. You have every tool available to make a story with good writing quality. if you can't afford an editor, guess what's been made recently. yes, that is called Ai, and you can go use chatgpt to check for any spelling mistake. here's a prompt you can use: "Check for any spelling mistakes." Which is one of the many Prompt you can use to Improve your story. You have so many tools at Your fingertips that it's maddening when you say murder instead of failed assassination Attempt. Character is he in one Sentences, then the next is a she. This simply ruins the flow of the story. There are so many issues at point. this author just needs to hire an editor or actually put effort into his writing. cause I put more effort into this review than the author at this point. to see such lazy writing is just appalling. I tried to give you the benefit of the doubt. but at chapter 75, which I paid for and believe when say, "Don't support this author ever!" okay, little Harsh, but until some big changes in overall writing quality and overall story telling. I will keep saying not to support this author.

1yr
Just_A_Reader_20
Just_A_Reader_20Lv13

Interesting synopsis. Waiting for the trial read 🤩

1yr
Daoist3LaNMk
Daoist3LaNMkLv3

I don't understand how this novel is No.1 on Popular ranking..and who gave the novel so many power stones and golden tickets, despite its trashy translation

1yr
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